Hey Vicki, of course! These are the ones I noticed:
1. “Ever-present cameras can also reframe aspects of our experience as memories to be recorded. We are choosing and cutting out parts of our whole day to save…”
Followed by:
“the constant presence of cameras also inadvertently reframes certain aspects of our experiences as moments to be documented. When...”
2. “Zoom and Google Hangouts is kinda great because it’s allowed us to connect with people all around the world, to WFH. During COVID it literally saved us ourselves.”
Followed by:
“Zoom and Google Hangouts are great because they facilitate connections with people worldwide and have enabled the widespread adoption of ...”
3. “The entire premise of smartphone apps is one of convenience. They are so helpful, they solve the problems we didn’t ...”
Followed by:
“Smartphone apps are amazing because they aim to solve problems for us, problems of irritation and convenience that we…”
4. “Paper might not feel like a technology at first, but before paper, we weren’t able to write down our thoughts. Paper has all...”
Followed by:
“Although it may not initially seem like a technological innovation, paper has been a transformative tool. Before paper...”
5. “
- Information overload. When everything is recorded, how do we know what to give our attention to? To remember?
- Harder to…“
Followed by:
“We grapple with information overload in a world where everything is meticulously recorded. The conundrum then…"
6. “A piece of furniture might feel even less like technology. But tables bring us together for dining...”
Followed by:
“A piece of furniture might not strike us as technology, especially something as …”
7. “Tables also change the dynamics of the space in a room. They take up space and imply certain seating arrangements…”
Followed by:
“Tables play a huge role in shaping the dynamics of a room. Their physical presence changes how you can ...”
8. “A clock keeps time and it also divides time. It chops up time into little pieces...”
Followed by:
“A clock serves a dual purpose: it not only keeps time but also divides it into …”
If they were intentional, my apologies for the unsolicited proofreading.
Great article either way!
